Writing 201: Poetry… Trust

I am loving the Writing 201 assignment today and can’t stop scribbling little snippets down!

Here’s the latest!

Broken

Because you lied, I cried all night

Reading the messages you left

Open on your phone, I sat alone and

Knew we were done

Everything we ever had reduced to

Nothing

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6 thoughts on “Writing 201: Poetry… Trust

  1. I really enjoyed the specificity of this scene. I’m wondering if, in revision, you might look at that second-to-last line super close in order to really bring home the bang of your closing line/word. Nice work.

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